de-ai-revise

de-ai-revise — make prose read less AI-generated

A writing-improvement tool. It audits a draft with three corpus-validated scorers, then rewrites only the flagged spans so the prose reads less like an LLM wrote it — plainer diction, burstier rhythm, fewer machine tics — while leaving already-human passages untouched.

This is the GENERATION side of the AI-writing apparatus, not detection. Detecting polished AI was proven near-impossible (60%+ false-positive rates on real human writing); this skill never renders a verdict on authorship. It improves readability for a human reader. The scorers GUIDE which spans to revise; they are not a target to maximize.

## The Iron Law of Goodhart

THE SCORERS GUIDE; THEY DO NOT GRADE. NO EDIT THAT IMPROVES A NUMBER BUT NOT THE READING. This is not negotiable.

A human reads the output. Mechanically maxing burstiness (chop every sentence), nuking every em-dash, or swapping every flagged word degrades prose to win a composite — that is the failure this skill exists to prevent. Revise a span only when the rewrite reads better to a person. Leave a flagged span alone when the author's choice is the right one (see Preserve-Human below).

The three scorers (all corpus-gated — do NOT re-derive)

scripts/de_ai_audit.py folds them into one line-anchored span list. Every signal was gated against a 14.3M-sentence law+finance corpus, so flags are AI defaults real scholars don't write — not generic "fancy word" lint.

Scorer	Catches	Remedy
Scored AI-tics (ai-anti-patterns/references/scored-tics-patterns.py)	phrase/structure tics that passed the ~0-human-rate gate (sev1-5)	rewrite the construction; these have no honest use
Tiered diction (references/diction.yaml)	fancy→plain words, tiered by corpus rate	always_flag → swap on sight; cluster → fix when 2+/para; density → vary at saturation; dropped → never touch (legal-normal)
Stylometrics (ai-anti-patterns/scripts/style_metrics.py)	rhythm/structure: composite_human_likeness 0-100, em-dash, metronomic runs, opener transitions, nominalization, burstiness/passive advisories	vary sentence length toward bursty; em-dash → semicolon/period; plainer Latinate→Anglo-Saxon

Modes

Mode	Trigger	Behavior
rewrite (default)	"de-AI this", "make it less AI"	audit → rewrite flagged spans → one corrective 2nd pass → return an edits-made + verification report (NOT the whole file)
detect-only	"just flag", "scan", "what AI tells are in this", "audit only"	audit only; report flagged spans + composite/tic-density; no edits
edit-in-place	"fix draft.md directly", "clean the file in place"	minimal targeted Edits to the file; preserve already-human paragraphs; re-audit after

Default to rewrite when unspecified.

Process (the spec)

START
  │
  ├─ Step 1: AUDIT — run de_ai_audit.py --json on the target
  │     uv run --with pyyaml python3 ${CLAUDE_SKILL_DIR}/scripts/de_ai_audit.py --json <file>
  │     Read: composite_human_likeness, tic_density, spans[], advisories[]
  │
  ├─ detect-only? → report spans + signals, STOP.
  │
  ├─ Step 2: REWRITE the flagged spans (NOT the whole draft)
  │     - tic spans                 → rewrite the construction (no honest use)
  │     - diction:always_flag       → swap for the listed plain replacement
  │     - diction:cluster           → fix enough of the cluster to drop below 2/para
  │     - style:em_dash             → recast as semicolon / period / comma — but NOT all (see Preserve)
  │     - advisories (burstiness)   → vary sentence length where it reads flat; do NOT chop for chop's sake
  │     PRESERVE already-human passages (no spans) untouched.
  │     PRESERVE quoted material, block quotes, code, footnote citations.
  │
  ├─ Step 3: ONE corrective 2nd pass
  │     Re-run de_ai_audit.py. Fix spans the first pass introduced or missed.
  │     STOP at 2 passes — a 3rd rarely finds more and costs a full regeneration.
  │
  └─ Step 4: REPORT (edits-made + verification), NOT the whole file
        - what changed and why (span → before → after, grouped by scorer)
        - before/after composite + tic-density (must improve or hold; if it dropped, you over-edited)
        - spans deliberately LEFT (author's voice / quoted / domain term) and why

If text and flowchart disagree, the flowchart wins.

Preserve-Human (the other half of Goodhart)

The composite penalizes em-dashes hard, and real legal scholarship — including this user's own published prose — uses them deliberately. Do NOT zero them out.

• Em-dashes: thin clusters and the clearest default-connector uses; KEEP em-dashes that set off a genuine appositive or a deliberate aside. Target fewer, not zero.
• dropped-tier diction (significant, robust, leverage, comprehensive, …): NEVER flag or swap — these are legal/finance-normal; the audit already excludes them.
• Quoted text, block quotes, statutory language, party names, code, citations: flag at most; never rewrite someone else's words or a term of art.
• A flagged span the author clearly chose (a fragment for emphasis, a repeated key term over elegant variation): leave it; note it in the report.

Fact rows

• The synthetic-AI baseline scores composite ~27 and tic-density 100; a real human legal draft scores ~55-65 with em-dashes as nearly the whole signal. So a composite in the 50s is NOT "AI" — it is a human who likes em-dashes. Treating the composite as a pass/fail bar instead of a span guide produces voice-destroying edits and is the exact failure the corpus tiering was built to prevent.
• diction.yaml dropped tier exists because "significant/robust/leverage" fire on every real law-review article; a linter that flags them is worse than none. The audit omits them — if you hand-flag one anyway, you reintroduced the false positive.
• A 3rd rewrite pass regenerates the whole span set for ~0 new fixes (CAP AT 2). The built-in corrective pass IS pass 2; "iterate to convergence" does not stack on it.
• Em-dash count near zero after a de-AI pass is over-editing, not success: you optimized the metric and flattened the author's rhythm. Fewer, not none.

Red Flags — STOP

• About to swap every flagged diction word → STOP. Cluster/density tiers are advisory; fix enough to clear the threshold, keep the ones that read right.
• About to delete every em-dash → STOP. Target fewer; keep deliberate appositives.
• About to rewrite a paragraph with zero spans because it "feels AI" → STOP. The audit found it human; trust the corpus over the vibe.
• About to run a 3rd rewrite pass → STOP. Cap is 2.
• About to return the whole rewritten file by default → STOP. Return the edits-made report unless the user asked for the full text.
• About to rewrite quoted/statutory text → STOP. Flag it; never alter someone else's words.

When invoked inside the writing workflow

• /writing-review runs de_ai_audit.py on every draft as a standard audit step; its always_flag + sev≥4 tic spans become AI-ism findings in REVIEW.md (advisory minors unless they cluster into a major).
• /writing-revise applies this skill (rewrite mode) as a non-optional pass on every edited draft after fixing REVIEW.md issues, then re-audits. The substrate gate is unchanged: AI-prose spans are advisory polish, not blocking criticals.